Christmas Tradition ~ Lost Forever or Soon to be Revamped?
Bonus! (Not for grade)
Eleven months has passed
December is now here
Wow, time went fast
Now it’s my favorite time of year
December holds two things close to my heart
The day I was born eighteen years ago
Thankful for my mom who started my character arc
And a certain holiday that is associated with snow
Every year, our decorations are put up in late November My little sister and I team up decorating our tree
My dad hangs up the lights, which at night they glow like ember
My mom wraps presents, for family and friends soon to be filled with glee
This team we’ve created as a family
Has made tradition that we do
For our favorite holiday annually
For the Christmas that holds us like glue
Our traditions consist of after final decorating we go to Church, celebrating the birth of Christ Later going home to eat our feast
With food that is probably overpriced
Soon going to bed, soon our gifts of tomorrow will be released
Overall, the traditions we continue
Is what helps me keep on living
Each of us showing our tribute
To “The gift that keeps on giving.”
Our Christmas Practices happen every year
But one thing comes to mind
Will these things we hold dear,
Be forever be left behind
I am now what you call coming of age
Turned eighteen on the thirteenth of December
My is life is turning to a new page
Will we have time to be together?
I’m now laying in awake on the night of Christmas eve
Now worried what the Future will hold
Will my parents and baby sister continue traditions without me?
Or will they leave them out in the cold?
The more I think, the more worried I get
My family depends on each other all the time
My sister and I work together like we are singing a duet
While my parents are aging, their backs not allowing them to climb for lights that mimic the sunshine
What would we do without the complete group?
To keep our spirits up and prevent from falling so soon
With me leaving the nest, losing a member of our troop
Will traditions be gone, like letting go of a balloon?
Next Morning, being woken up by my sister
Her screams of joy put a smile on my face
Running down the stairs, hoping she doesn’t end up with a blister
She soon arrives to the tree, with me in tow, close to our fireplace
My parents are smiling, finally happy that we are awake
Both telling my sister, “Look what Santa left for you.”
They looked at me winking, indicating this secret a keepsake
Also giving me a present in wrapping paper of a nice hue
Seeing their gaze of determination to keep their annual traditions living Made me wonder, Why was I worrying in the first place?
Seeing all this joyfulness in the air thriving
Put happiness upon my face
Knowing the bond we all created
Is what Christmas is about
As we are solely motivated
By spending time with each other, with a bond that’ll cause us to never back out
These traditions shows our teamwork
Making us happy as we can be
Now drinking hot coco, admiring our artwork
Along with sitting watching holiday shows near our Christmas tree.
13 comments:
William James Smith III: Excellent job writing a poem about such an unknown thing that may seem obvious to us, but it truly is not! Christmas spirit always will be different in different households depending on the personal belief and religion of the household. Not everyone will celebrate Christmas religiously, but the same morals of family, friends, and selflessness always apply in one way or another.
It is uncertain as to how and when the holidays will be as they once were, but they will get better soon enough! We all miss our friends and family very much, and we will appreciate the holidays so much more than ever before now as a result of this obstacle!!!
I hope you have had a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!!!
William
Really well written piece! I enjoyed reading the entire thing! It was like a children's Christmas book, but for adults/teens. It gave a deeper meaning with worrying about the future and having to let go of the things that make us happy when it is time for us to grow up and live life. But traditions like yours made me realize traditions can always continue, and the memories are never forgotten.
Very good piece. I like how you started cheerful with classic Christmas and winter imagery and then transitioned to a worried tone. I am sure, however, that the Christmas traditions of your family will not die out and that you will only come back to celebrate with them again! Great job
Loved this piece! it was really well written . Your family traditions are so beautiful and they will certainly stay around forever!
Very high level write. It was very unique how you contrasted christmas joy and happiness and rapidly factored into sadness and a different emotional element. This was great and highlighted the importance of memories.
Really good job! Loved it , it put me in the Christmas spirit again hahah. The winter imagery was great and I enjoyed reading you poem!
Excellent work. It was a delight to see the contrast in emotions from old style christmas transistions to a sad somber emotional writing tactic. Great Essay.
Really Great Job! Your family traditions are beautiful. You gave so many emotions and meshed them together very well. Thank you for creating this!
This is written so beautifully, you have so much power with your words! I could imagine everything so clearly. -Leah Thompson
It was very nice to read a poem revolving around such a joyous holiday and the fear that the joy might end with your departure. I'm certainly glad nothing changed in the end!
This was absolutely amazing ad your rhyming made the poem even more interesting. It captured me as the reader and enticed me to continue reading it. This was a very emotional and touching poem amazing job. -Arnold Porter Jr
I really loved the way you portrayed your emotions through this. I loved how this made me feel involved just by the way you used your words
I really enjoyed reading this and hearing about your family traditions. Great work!
- Neema Muteti
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