”Please Dad, how
do you expect me to be social and at least try to fit in if you don't even let
me go to a party that is only like 2 miles away” I said in an impatient tone.
“Really
Veronica do you actually think I am going to let you go to a party where there
is obviously going to be drugs and achohl, no your out of you mind” .
”If mom
was still here with us she would of let me go” I said at the same time running
to my room.
When I was about eleven years old my mom was diagnosed with bone
cancer. About two years later the chemo stopped working and the next thing you know
I am at her funeral surrounded by people crying and her loved ones . Since then my whole life was turned around.
My dad thought that moving to a different city would be a fresh start , but
like always he was wrong . I started to become really emo and hanging out with
the wrong people and doing the craziest things. “ I am not staying at home
again on a Friday night , no way” I said to myself. I locked my door got my
purse and sneaked out using the window leading to the front lawn. It was
already 7:00 so I decided to take the short cut which was on a deserted road. I
continued walking when I noticed that a white truck was following me . I turned
the corner hoping he still wouldn't be there , I turned around slowly making
sure he knew I wasn't expecting anything yet he was still there. So I decided
to make a run for it when I noticed he was right behind me catching up to me
and the last thing I remember was being thrown in the truck of the white truck.”
At
about 7:00pm a girl under the name Veronica Hastings was kip napped heading to
a friends party if you have any information about her disappearance people call
the number listed below” I was woken up by the tv going on in the other room.
It took me time to process that all of that happened under a hour and I still
couldn't believe that I could die due to one simple mistake. I tried to feel if
I still had my phone which was luckily still there in my back pocket of my pants.
Using all my strength I pushed my self to the side and took my pants off with
my legs and through it over my head with my mouth I got my phone and dialed the
only person in my head .
“Dad! I'm sorry I don't know what to do please help me
I'm scared”
.”it's okay just breathe do you have any idea where you might be ,
do you hear any music or anything familiar” .
“Umm the only thing I could hear
is circus music like they used to play at the annual circus “ I said in a
frighten voice.
“ I know exactly were you are I'm on my way with the police “ .
I layed there still waiting to hear the sirens to a police car and my dads
footsteps running to hug me,yet it never
came.
4 comments:
Wow. That was really good. i like how you described how she was waiting to hear the police sirens and her dads footsteps. Really good job!
You did a great job! It was very intense. I was so shocked when she got kidnapped and they didn't find her.
Jocelyn Rangel
P.2
That was an intense story! It reminded of the movie "The Call". I was so curious to find out what would happen next when she got kidnapped. You should definitely make a part 2 on what happens next.
Shayan Khan
Period 6
Margaret Moyer
Per.5
This piece is sad and the fact she wasn't found amplified this fact. I think it was a good choice to end it like that and it left a very good message. I feel like people aren't careful thinking things like this can't happen to them and yet it happens every day. The usage of your diction of a teenage girl and it truly helped the tone of the dark piece.
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