Naruto
was sitting by the fireplace and remembering his lovely wife, Hinata. It’s been
ten years since she died at the hands of Pain, a member of the Akatsuki. After
all these years he still perceives her death as a result of his carelessness.
As she took her last breath h promised to protect their child, Tsekuno, as much
as possible. Tsekuno came running into the room. “Dad, I passed the first round
of the Chunin Exams." "You did son. That’s amazing." Tsekuno had
his father's hair and burning spirit. He had his mom's special chakra eyes.
Tsekuno also had the soul of the nine tailed fox coursing through his veins.
"Cool shows me what you got. Use some of the justsu you learned."
Jutsu are moves that require chakra, energy. Tsekuno use his Clone jutsu.
Suddenly there were 20 copies of him and they all attacked Naruto. “You can’t
beat me with that type of jutsu." He blocked all of the clones repeated
attacks. "Now try demon fortress." Tsekuno focused his chakra into
the ground causing a star insignia that has 9 points to appear on the ground.
Naruto walked on it and there was a great pressure forcing him to the floor and
sucking his chakra out of him. “Good work son. Go to bed the second part of the
exams is a tournament tomorrow." They got up early the next day and
arrived at the stadium where the tournament will be held. The first round
Tsekuno had to battle a ninja that uses water jutsu. Tsekuno progressed all the
way to the final battle. He was facing Josiah, the son of Gaara. Gaara was the
finalist Naruto faced when he was younger. The battle begins. Tsekuno rushes at
Josiah with his dagger. Josiah evades it effortlessly. He uses his Sand Grip
jutsu to get a hold of Tsekuno it looked like the end. Suddenly something was
something to Tsekuno. His eyes were turning red and he started transforming
into the nine tailed fox. Tsekuno unlocked a new form. He started to attack
using all his strength at once. Josiah falls in pain losing the match. Tsekuno
looks up into the sky and says “I finally did it mom."
8 comments:
Wow this is really good Bryan. I thought it was sad how Tsekuno felt how he had to prove something to his mom, but also nice that he did. Overall I believe that this was was a good story with a good plot.
Someone has finally written something about anime. Yay! Well I like your story it's really interesting and detailed keep up the work.
-Vymian San
Love your story! It's very well written.
Chiquitita Annisa P.2
This story was very interesting! I really enjoyed this story, good job!
This story was very interesting! I really enjoyed this story, good job!
Joseph Mendez
per.2
I love Naruto, so i loved this story. I haven't finished the manga but i enjoyed the picture of the future life of Naruto that you painted.
I just started watching Naruto, and I'm really glad to see someone write with great detail and emotions about the show. I love this future life you created for them and the incorporation of Gaara and the different skills Naruto's son possesses. Just from the dialogue and character description about Tsekuno I can already see a young version of Naruto. Great story!
Well described story. Those are some interesting choices for names, to be completely honest I don't know if I could pronounce half of them.
Josie Starr
Period 2
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