It was the
day of June 5, 2118 and I was with my friends, flying around the city of
Portland, Oregon at incredible speed playing air tag. When playing this game if
you make one wrong turn or move you can get yourself hurt, hurt someone else,
or break something, so it’s a dangerous game, but it’s one of our favorite. Oh
pardon me for not introducing myself, my name is Ray Stockton, 17 years old,
senior at Forrest Field High School, a Christian and I have special abilities. I
would also like to introduce my friends Trevor Hicks, Rick Steels, and Billy
Watson. They also are 17 years old but we are a few days apart from each other,
seniors at Forrest Field High School, Christians and likewise they have special
abilities too. If you are wondering how we got these special abilities, my
friends say it’s a gift from God and it was, but at the time of getting these
abilities I did not believe so. I’m going to take you back to the year of 2112
when I got my powers and a life journey that changed my life forever.
Friday
after school, Trevor invited me to church with Rick and Billy on Sunday morning.
I went to church with them a couple of times, but just went so I could hang out
with them. I knew that God existed and how He sent His son to die on the cross
for our sins, so that we may believe, have forgiveness, and that we might be
saved, yet I did not want to believe. I did not want to believe because I
enjoyed my sin that I was in and did not want to give it up. So I get to the
youth house at the church of Calvary Chapel and my friends greet me with
excitement. Trevor was the first to speak: “Morning Ray, how are you doing, did
you have a good weekend?” Ray: “Morning Trevor, I’m doing pretty good, pretty
good weekend so far, nothing too interesting, how about you guys?” Trevor: “Pretty
good as well. Billy, Rick, and I got to go evangelizing yesterday and this guy
gave himself to the Lord, it was amazing, you should’ve been, there it was so
cool!” Billy: “yeah definitely, like the joy it gave us knowing that we saved
another person from eternal death but keep in mind that in Ephesians 2:8 say “For
it is by grace you have been saved, through faith-and this is not from
yourselves, it is the gift of God.’” Rick: “(hand gesturing toward Billy and
Trevor) I bet you guys can agree that it was awesome and you would like to do
it again?” Billy and Trevor: “Definitely.” We continue to talk for a few
minutes until the leaders called us in because service was about to start. Even
though I don’t believe, for some reason this message spoke to me in that I felt
kind of guilty and hurt after it, but I ignored it. Little did my friends and I
know, that God had a big plan to get me saved and to use our group of friends
to save the world.
So later
that night I got ready for bed and something told me that tomorrow was going to
be different. I woke up and remembered that we had no school because of
Presidents Day. I walked into the restroom, got cleaned up, and I noticed that
my hand started to shake really fast “what the?” I was really confused so I ran
down stairs and I was there in one second! I realized “COOL I HAVE SUPER SPEED!”
Then two more special abilities came which was flight and strength, I was
thrilled. A message came in from the group chat with my friends and it said “I just got super powers, praise God, praise
God, praise God.” Later that day we got together at our tree house to
discuss our new special gifts. Each of us all had flight and super speed, but had
a different third power. Meanwhile the U.S and Russia with other countries
broke out into WWIII. Three years go by and we learn how use our powers and see
what are limits are. The war is still going on and unlike the first two World
Wars, this time it’s in center of the United States and spreading in all
directions. Lucky enough it hasn’t reach our city.
My friends
and I get caught using our powers in the city messing around with all the comic
book myths. The following day we are at our treehouse and the government comes
knocking at our trap door. They request of our service to help fight Russia and
the other countries to win U.S the war. All of us are nervous and don’t know
what to do but we gladly comply with their request. They give us basic hand to
hand combat, and gun training. The government debriefs us on what the mission
is and our objective. During the mission I have a mental breakdown and said “I
can’t do this,” “you guys can do this because you have God and I don’t.” Rick:
“You can have God too, do you want to accept Christ into your life?” Ray: “yes
I do.” Rick: “guys come over and help me lead Ray with the sinners prayer” So
they came over and prayed with me and at that moment I felt whole and renewed
and trusting that God will keep us safe in the missions. I was ready to continue
our mission as a Christian in faith. While in missions we shared the gospel
with many POWS. The U.S won the war and we received medals of Honor for our
service. We are now back and relaxing from playing air tag on a building when
all of a sudden we appeared in a heaven facing our savior. My friends and I
realized the rapture had just taken place.
I really enjoyed this story. Your combinations of religion, global conflict, and super heroes tied together to create an action-filled plot. By combining current religious ideology with your own interpretation of the future, the story unfolded brilliantly. As a Christian myself, I appreciate this story as it shines a new light on the faith by using both factual evidence from the Bible and fictional powers that one gains from following God in the reality that you envisioned.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the plot of your story as I also find great interest in fictional superhero stories. I find it affective to incorporate religion in your story because one of the characters has an internal struggle which he overcomes with the help of his friends. Great work!
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You were able to show your creativity in this blog and you did just that. You were able to create a whole other world that I was able to leap into. Just being able to imagine something like this really encouraged me to read more. You even added things like another world war and things that are unobtainable to humans. That made me enjoy your work even more.
ReplyDeleteits really funny, not what i was expecting at all from the story. I can tell you're very religious and that you believe wholeheartedly in God as your savior; I like it. You incorporated multiple things in your life that are important to you, superheroes, religion, friends, etc. i am a person who admits i am not too religious, i would like to be but there is a certain.. something.. thats stopping me, i dont know what, maybe - even I - like to live in my sin.
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