Nearly
three years ago on May 18th, 2013 I was fortunate enough to attend
my Grandfather’s fourth retirement party. To all of those asking the obvious
question “How do you retire four times?” my Grandpa simply told me that he
retired from four different companies because he could never see himself fully
retiring from the workforce. Upon arriving at the party, I saw that at least 80
percent of the guests were people that I have never seen before. I specifically
remember rolling my eyes as I walked into the house since I would have to
endure the awkwardness of small talk and fake cheerfulness for the rest of the
evening. I sat myself down at a small table and prepared to heroically fight an
epic battle against the evil temptation of sleep.
As I began to drift off and wonder
when dinner would be served, one of the guests sat down in a chair adjacent to
mine. It was difficult to see the man’s face at first because it was partially
covered by his hand and a cell phone that he was speaking into. His
conversation drew to a close, at which point the man turned to me, furrowed his
eyebrows, and gave me a rather confused look. Immediately after he turned, I
recognized him as a very prominent political figure (No, not Bernie) and
readied myself to put on a good smile and not mess up saying hello. Before I
could even make a sound, he asked “What in the hell are you doing son?” Now
obviously I am shocked at this point because I have no idea what I did to
offend this very powerful person and now it looks like they are going to get
into an argument with me in front of all these other strangers. I do give
myself some credit for being able to get the words “Excuse me?” out of my mouth
in a timely manner, but I then sat wondering just what would happen next.
He readjusted himself in his chair
and began talking to me, this time in a much less confrontational tone. “I know
exactly who you are and I cannot understand for the life of me why you’re
sitting here alone at this table. Pretty much all of the guests here are very
influential people that are very powerful in their fields and instead of trying
to get on good terms with them and build a strong network, you’re sitting over
here doing pretty much nothing. Go out and take advantage of everything that
you possibly can in order to help yourself become more successful.” I sat back
and reflected for a moment. I was surrounded by dozens of people who could very
much help me in my life, and yet I sat at this lonely table in the corner. I
turned to the man and said “You’re right.” I thanked him for sharing his advice
and he gave a small smile and a gentle head nod in return.
After the conversation ensued, I
decided to get up and introduce myself to as many people as possible. It
actually turned out to be quite a great time as I was able to share many laughs
and stories with other guests. As the party began to end and guests started to
leave, I said goodbye to everyone as they left out the door. I said goodbye to
the man who had initially talked to me and he did the same, giving me a firm
handshake and a wink as he left. I had to stay to help my grandparents clean up
and then I went to bed in the guest bedroom. I was woken up very late the next
morning by my Grandpa, he told me that many of the guests have called him to say
good things about me and a few wanted to know when I would turn 18 so that I
could be hired for internships.
I learned a very important thing
that night; make use of absolutely every opportunity and object around you. The
road to success is obviously a path that is not very easy to navigate, so why
not bring as many tools and supplies with you as possible? Everyone reading
this has access to a giant network of academic support, a great school, and
many forms of aid that exist solely on our high school campus. We have all been
given many great resources to use and I sincerely hope that we are all able
take full advantage of them in order to help us fulfil own dreams and
aspirations.
10 comments:
I read your entry only because your'e my competition, but I have to say I did like your piece. I like how you set up a backup story to why you were at that event, the present with the man talking to you, and your future when you spoke about turning 18 for internships. I also enjoyed how you made an overall statement about your experience and the lesson you learned from it.
I love the dialogue going on between you and this man at the table. It begins simple and then turns into a type of mentorship. You also used a very good example of how to grasp opportunity to use it to your advantage. It is true that we all have a network of people but are we going to take initiative of our own lives and use the connections we have? This also relates back to the idea that everyone starts somewhere. It doesn't matter where you start but how you got there.
Jordyn France
Cogswell
AP English
I really enjoyed that your piece was written with intent to inspire. I found it really interesting that you did get up and talk to other people after being told so because personally I would have gotten embarrassed and mad. I feel like most of these are stories just to share but you presented your piece with a purpose. Everything you want us to take from this is true especially since we are leaving the safe sheltered world of high school.
Jeannette Martinez
Period 2
What a great lesson to learn! And to read! You did a great job explaining what you meant and the title went along with it really well! The way you described things as well was amazing with great detail!
Karina Blocker
Period 4
Christian, you're one of the most hard-working geniuses that I know. Especially during APUSH your knowledge flowed through every question and I really admired you. I'm glad that you're still learning how to grow as well. I feel like most of us can't put ourselves out there to talk to random people, even if someone tells us too. Great piece christian!
Christian,
Your unquenchable thirst for knowledge has ingrained itself into a part of your identity as an individual. Even as a young high school student, your search for opportunity has led to your development of a ninety year old's grey wisdom. This piece undoubtedly exemplifies this aspect of your personality.
Job well done!
That was an interesting experience you encountered. It was nice of the man to tell you to get to know others in the party. It was good that you learned something and it was cool that you actually had a great time. Thanks for sharing!
- Jessie Santos
Period 1
I enjoyed this piece because it provided a possible situation that young and aspiring individuals may encounter in the future and provides some insight as to what we should do when the time comes. Also, it provides an important life lesson that to me says that we should take advantage of every opportunity we are given in life because we never know where it may lead and if we may regret it one day in the future.
Period 5
Hunter Fierro
It's a bit crazy how small scenarios can open big doors for people without actually looking for one, yet through out your piece it may have been a new thing to endure. The ending of your piece pointed out a message i didnt think of unless i read it to the end.
- Diana Godinez
Period 5
This piece was great because it involves something we all go through because new opportunities open up all around us. I really like how you connected the message of not taking any opportunity for granted with a story about you grandfather's retirement party. Overall great job!
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